Microfiction: Revision

Sing a song loudly, and they will hear.

“But who is ‘they?’” he asked, and the narrator looked down at him and quirked his mouth.

“I don’t know, I’m being vaguely biblical, I guess?”

“Oh, okay.”

“Uh, I mean, why do you ask?”

“I don’t know—it just seemed an odd choice of words for it.”

“I mean, I could change it.”

“No, no! Don’t do that!”

“But you said you didn’t like it.”

“Yeah, but what do I know?”

“I mean, probably a lot—I did create you and all.”

“I suppose that is true.”

“So, here, we shall begin the story again, but it will be better this time.”

Special thanks to: Melissa Potter

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